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This is an unfinished draft — just the first part of a bigger erotic story I’m working on. I’m sharing it early to see how the style and vibe land with readers before taking it further. The setup: a late-night webcam raffle turns into something much hotter than expected. Two very different women — one sharp and dominant, the other soft with cracks in her halo — invite the “winner” into their world. What follows is unapologetically smutty: an FFM threesome with playful femdom/femsub dynamics, rich description, and a voyeuristic edge. If you’re curious and open to giving feedback, I’d love to have you in this early circle. Your thoughts now will help shape how the story grows from here.