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On a hostile world beyond the edge of Imperium space, the past is not as dead and buried as the citizens of Mechhaven had hoped, but it might be their only salvation. On Darkhaven Forged is the next adventure in the Mechhaven Saga coming in June 2022. Thank you for agreeing to be a beta reader for Mechhaven Book 3: On Darkhaven Forged. During this phase, I'm looking for your general impressions of the story. You'll have the opportunity to leave chapter by chapter feedback as well as highlighting and commenting on specific passages. This is still a work in progress and while I have done an initial edit, it hasn't been to my editor yet. That will happen after I've incorporated your feedback. So to keep things simple, for each chapter please let me know the following: A. What did you find awesome? B. Did anything bore you? C. Did you find anything confusing? D. Was there anything that was dumb? E. Were you excited to go to the next chapter? In terms of spelling, grammar, and punctuation, my editor and I will work on that during that phase of the edit, but if you want/need to point out any mistakes, word use, or continuity issues, feel free, but that shouldn't be your main focus. I may or may not use all of your feedback, but please know that I appreciate the time you have taken to help me produce a better book!